Q In this discussion, you will work on paragraphing and transitions in your writing. Initial Post (due by 11:59 p.m. on Friday) Select two consecutive paragraphs from your case study project and complete the following: • Post the original paragraphs • Revise the paragraphs to include appropriate paragraph breaks and transitions. • Also revise to use semicolons and colons, as appropriate. • Be sure to indicate your revisions in bold type. Peer Responses (first peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday; second peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Tuesday) Review the original and revised paragraphs your classmates and comment on the effectiveness of the revisions. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your responses: • Do the revisions improve the clarity of the ideas? If so, how? If not, why not? • Is the use of semicolons and colons correct? How might they be used more effectively? • Are the transition words used in the revised paragraphs appropriate? If so, why? If not, suggest alternative transition words. • What insight about paragraphing and transitions in writing have you gained by reviewing your classmate's post? • What insight might you offer your classmate regarding paragraphing and transitions in writing?